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At New Musicals Inc. in Los Angeles, we develop new musicals.

Here’s our blog, which includes posts and musings on the craft of writing musical theatre, along with our observations about developing new musicals, and how to get them produced.

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New Featured Video: An Interview with Apples & Oranges Studios Tim Kashani and Pamela Winslow Kashani

Our featured video this week is an interview with TIM KASHANI and PAMELA WINSLOW KASHANI, the master-minds behind Apples and Oranges Studios, producers of the Tony award winning musical An American in Paris (among many others!). Apples and Oranges Studios combines the team’s diverse involvement in the entertainment industry with experience in the tech start-up and enterprise IT worlds to develop and produce new musicals in cutting-edge ways. Utilizing revolutionary tools and complex data analysis to build audiences and drive business, Apples and Oranges Studios endeavors to tell compelling stories with strong commercial viability. View the interview on NMI’s YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/anmtTV

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Naked Assessments of a Century of Musicals

My mentor, Lehman Engel was wont to say, “We all know it will sound better when Ethel Merman sings it wearing a green sequined dress – but for now let’s focus on the writing.”

I have written four basic monthly essays. 1) How a musical lover’s first legit show is seminal (for that person); 2, 3, and 4) Principles writers should consider when creating the book, the music, or the lyrics for a musical.  We extract these principles from the past while the form is striding into the future.  Still I believe there is a direct relationship between Showboat and Hamilton in the sense that the current show could not have been written if the earlier and admittedly old-fashioned show had not preceded it.

6a00d8345212eb69e20148c83b3ce1970c-800wiIt feels as if the American Musical Theatre is experiencing a transition that began in the 60s and continues today.  A similar transition in classical music began early in the 20th century, but it was bucking a tradition of 300 years.  The American musical is still not quite 100 years old, and it is fair to say it is definitely in flux today.  Very traditional looking and sounding shows like A Gentlemen’s Guide to Love and Murder and Matilda compete with shows considered ground-breaking, like Hamilton and Fun Home.

I think this mix of familiar forms and new wrinkles make today a very exciting time to be working as a writer in this form.  There is clearly room for invention – in fact, there seems to be a thirst for invention.  But new, old or somewhere in between, the form is still selling tickets, and not just on Broadway.  Musicals old and new are filling theatres small and large across the country.  In recent weeks I saw two full houses in southern California, one for a brand new musical in La Mirada (Empire) and one for a revered Sondheim classic in Thousand Oaks (A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Forum).

Every decade has its seminal, seemingly game-changing titles on Broadway, but the basic ways these shows work seem so similar to me as to be minor variations on a theme rather than the startling innovations the critics often like to claim.  “Des McAnuff has reinvented Broadway!” they chirped when The Who’s Tommy opened on Broadway in 1993 (right across the street from The Kiss of the Spider Woman, which was well received but not nearly with the same ecstasy as Tommy).  I think, if we researched the number of productions both shows have received since opening 26 years ago we will find that Spider Woman is the show that has survived its Broadway run and been produced many times over this period, whereas I have not heard of any significant productions of Tommy, although I assume there have been some.

It’s very difficult in the heat of the moment to tell whether the current Broadway success is truly a show for the ages or merely a popular phenomenon, the equivalent of a Pet Rock on Broadway.  Where is The Producers today?  Where will Hamilton be in 25 years?  Who can say?  This is made more difficult because the fans of these highly popular shows are so totally convinced that the work they love is great.  Add to this the juggernauts of Cats (about to be revived) and Phantom (yet to close!) and the waters get muddier and muddier.  Certainly if commercial success on Broadway is the barometer, Cats and Phantom win hands down.  They would clearly be the #1 and #3 greatest shows of all time (I think the revival of Chicago has slipped into the #2 spot).

“We all know it will sound better when Ethel Merman sings it wearing a green sequined dress – but for now let’s focus on the writing.”

These shows, like all shows, have their detractors as well as their fans.  We know we can please some of the people some of the time but no one has learned to please all of the people all of the time.   It is very difficult to be objective about things we love and things we hate.  (Is anybody really objective about Donald Trump?)  If our interest is in writing better shows, I think it makes sense to try to be objective about the hit shows of the form (not quite 100 years old unless you really stretch the meaning of the word “musical”).  I pledge to make a serious effort to confine my remarks to an examination of the libretto and score of each show I analyze on these pages.  I don’t intend to study only shows I ‘liked’ or shows I ‘didn’t like.’  My opinion is not better than yours or anybody else’s, including Ben Brantley’s and Charles Isherwood’s.  Opinions are merely opinions, and people who know me know I have strong ones – but they are for private conversation, not public consumption.

sweeney-todd-broadway-poster-1979I want to look at a seminal musical from each of the decades from 1920 to 2000.  It will be harder to choose one from the 90s onward since not enough time has passed to determine whether the shows will truly pass the test of time.  Many will (and should) argue with the choices I have made.  There is always at least one person in every crowd who doggedly prefers black jelly beans.

1920s:  Showboat
1930s:  Porgy and Bess (I know, I know.  They say it’s an opera.  So what?)
1940s:  Oklahoma
1950s:  West Side Story
1960s:  Fiddler on the Roof
1970s:  Sweeney Todd
1980s:  Les Miserables
1990s:  Rent
2000s:  Wicked
2010s:  Since we haven’t finished the decade, I won’t try for one here (but I’m betting it will be Hamilton).

Each examination of the shows above will consist of four parts – an analysis of the book, the music and the lyrics followed by a discussion of how well these elements work together to tell the story.  Here are the criteria I plan to apply in each section.

The Book:  Narrative structure (beginning, middle and end); Cause and Effect of Action, Character Development, Thematic Strength, Diction in Dialogue,  and how these elements affect the willing suspension of disbelief.

The Lyrics:  Song Topics, Development of the Central Song Idea, Lyric Diction (especially how it matches or fails to match the characters’ diction as established in the book), Specificity of Language and Imagery, Consistency of Rhythmic Patterns (in matching sections of the song according to its form –whether ABAB [verse/chorus], AABA or some other song form), Grammar (appropriate to character), and Thematic Importance.

The Music:  Melodic, Rhythmic and Harmonic Development, Style (whether the modalities or tonalities of the songs fit the dramatic moments they serve, either by underlining them, playing against them or informing them in some other way), Rhythmic Prosody (matching the melodic rhythm to the natural spoken rhythms of the lyric), Euphony (whether the lyric is easily sung over the contour of the melody), Compositional Invention and Integrity (whether the music of a song represents the composer’s “voice” or seems to be merely derivative).

Overall Effectiveness:  Do the songs flow from the action of the play?  Is there an abrupt change in energy when a song begins or have the authors created an effective bridge from the spoken word to the singing?  Are the songs distributed throughout the evening in a balanced way to provide variety in tempo, content, and vocal range, etc?  In shows with an intermission, is the gap effectively managed?  What is the theme of the show and how consistently does the material from the book and songs support that theme?  Does the ending satisfy or frustrate the audience’s expectations?  (I will attempt to confine my remarks to the writing rather than the staging or elements of stagecraft like the famous chandelier in Phantom or the phantasmagorical costumes and puppetry of The Lion King, i.e. ignoring the “green sequined dress.”)

As I wade through the task of researching and writing these analyses, I would appreciate hearing from anybody who thinks of titles which more clearly represent the decades other than those I have chosen.  I would also appreciate hearing from anyone who would either challenge or add to the criteria I have outlined.

Until Showboat, then…

–John
July 15, 2016

 

Musical Theatre Lyrics

Hmmm.  It all starts with the book, But everyone wants to come out humming the music.  Still the fact is that, since the early 1920s, the American musical has always been distinguished by the sophistication of its lyrics.  There was a lot of word play in the beginning:

1925:  (from No, No, Nanette, lyrics by Irving Caesar and Otto Harbach)

SHOW THE LADIES EVERY STEP YOU KNOW
JUST RAISE HADES TILL THEY TINGLE
MINGLE TILL THEY THINK YOU’RE SINGLE
YOU CAN DANCE WITH ANY GIRL AT ALL
AS LONG AS YOU COME HOME TO ME.

Before too long, inventive imagery and irony crept in:

babesInAmrsSheet1937:  (from Babes In Arms, lyrics by Lorenz Hart)

THE SLEEPLESS NIGHTS, THE DAILY FIGHTS
THE QUICK TOBOGGAN WHEN YOU REACH THE HEIGHTS
I MISS THE KISSES AND I MISS THE BITES
I WISH I WERE IN LOVE AGAIN.

The 1940s brought us the defining achievements of the Rodgers and Hammerstein collaboration with an almost perfect marriage of music and lyrics both rhythmically and in the “singability” of the lyrics over the contour of the melodies that presented them.  The organic nature of the lyrics, often growing seamlessly out of the dialogue, spawned many imitators, right up to the present day.

1942:  (from Oklahoma, book and lyrics by Oscar Hammerstein II)

LAUREY
Well, you jist can’t go around kissin’ every man that asts you!  Didn’t anybody ever tell you that?

ADO ANNIE
Yeow, they told me…

IT AIN’T SO MUCH A QUESTION OF NOT KNOWIN’ WHUT TO DO
I KNOWED WHUT’S RIGHT AND WRONG SINCE I BEEN TEN.
I HEARD A LOT OF STORIES – AND I RECKON THEY ARE TRUE –
ABOUT HOW GIRLS’RE PUT UPON BY MEN.
I KNOW I MUSTN’T FALL INTO THE PIT
BUT WHEN I’M WITH A FELLER – I FERGIT!

Rodgers and Hammerstein continued to experiment and refine their crafts as their collaboration labored on, striving to make the words and music work together to illuminate the moment.  Listen to the plea in Lady Thiang’s voice in both the music and the words to the song Something Wonderful from The King And I (also book and lyrics by Oscar Hammerstein II):

1951:  HE WILL NOT ALWAYS SAY
WHAT YOU WOULD HAVE HIM SAY
BUT NOW AND THEN HE’LL SAY
SOMETHING WONDERFUL…

The fall and rise of the melody successfully mimics the fall and rise of a voice begging for more understanding from a listener.  In this case, the listener is Mrs. Anna.  Lady Thiang is asking Mrs. Anna to be tactful, to help the king manage international relationships without suggesting that he actually needs help.  Her advice mustn’t sound like advice.  Further, Mrs. Anna must go to the king, not wait for him to ask for her help, something he is far too proud to do.  Lady Thiang realizes she is dealing with two very strong personalities and that she must be diplomatic in her request.  The song, and its placement in the scene, is a marvel of craft, and well worth studying.

The lyric to a theatre song, and the way the music presents the lyric must be carefully crafted to convey the moment.  In its diction, the lyric needs to reflect the character’s capacity for language, while honoring whatever social restrictions the setting and other characters present place on the singer.  The best theatre songs focus on a single topic (like The Surrey With The Fringe On Top) and yet this topic is not always what the song is about (Surrey is about Curly trying to get a date with a Laurey – the Surrey is merely a means to an end.).  Unlike dialogue, the lyric needs rhythm and rhyme, and these elements need to be present in an organized way that literally helps the audience understand both the topic of the song and the reason it is being sung.  Making it possible for the audience to hear the lyric is not nearly as important as making it possible for the audience to fully understand the lyric instantly, without reflection.  That understanding needs to transcend the mere meaning of the words and achieve the greater impact of the subtextual information and thematic thrust of the moment in the show.  The craft of writing lyrics carefully and thoughtfully to achieve emotional truth and serve the character in the moment is what makes this transcendent understanding possible.

It is the craft of lyric writing that makes it possible for the audience to instantly and fully understand the emotional moment for the character.

The lyric must be written in the voice of the character.  Every character has a unique speech pattern, and the lyric should reflect this.  Where was the character born?  What education does the character have?  What social position does the character enjoy, aspire to or strive to escape?  (Study Adelaide’s Lament from Guys And Dolls, lyrics by Frank Loesser.  The woman is trying to educate herself, but ultimately relies on her own common sense to sum up what she is learning: “In other words just from waiting around for that plain little band of gold, a person can develop a cold.”)

The lyric must attend to the social moment of the character.  Characters adjust their language according to the circumstances.  Think about Eliza Doolittle in My Fair Lady (book and lyrics by Allan Jay Lerner), striving to pronounce everything properly at Ascot, but losing control during the race to shout “Come on, Dover, move yer bloomin’ arse!”  Eliza couldn’t contain her excitement during the race, but earlier in the show she is forced to stifle her anger and must wait until she is alone to vent in the song “Just You Wait, ‘Enry ‘Iggins!”

The lyric must reflect the character’s thoughts and feelings in the moment of the play.  At the end of the first act of Gypsy (lyrics by Stephen Sondheim), Herbie asks Rose to marry him and settle down.  Louise begs her to say yes.  But Rose, angry at June’s desertion, is determined to forge ahead.  If she can’t make Baby June a star, she’ll make Louise a star.  “You’ll be swell, you’ll be great, gonna have the whole world on a plate!”

The lyric has to do all of this work within the constraints of the musical form chosen by the composer.  There are very few syllables to a line of lyric, so it is not wise to waste one.  The hearability and understandability of the lyric is affected by orchestration,, choreography, swirling costumes and mechanical scenery.  With all those elements competing for the audience’s attention, the lyric has to emerge clearly so the patrons can simultaneously hear and understand the lyric in the voice of the character in the moment of the play.

There was a time when lyrics did not need to flow so seamlessly from the dialogue, when two people could have a “cute meet,” hear a bell tone in the orchestra, and launch into a charming love-at-first-sight tune.  We’ve grown past that.

We seem to have also grown past metaphor and simile at times to a state where specificity is rooted in reality – harsh, unromantic and filled with expletives, like this example from Next To Normal (book and lyrics by Brian Yorkey):.  “Mozart was crazy, flat fucking crazy, batshit I hear.”  Over my career I have watched our society lose its innocence and insouciance the way the characters In La Boheme do when Mimi dies.  During World War II and its aftermath, we felt indestructible.  We were optimistic.  We knew things would get better and better as time went on.  Somewhere along the way we became skeptical, and we now feel as if things are changing for the worse, not the better.  The American psyche is having a dark night of the soul, and this is reflected in our musical theatre as well as other aspects of our lives.

Fortunately, Americans can’t seem to stay sulking in the dark too long, and the culture’s original impulse to optimism and cheerfulness continues to express itself in our entertainment media.  On Broadway today:  Aladdin, American In Paris, Kinky Boots, She Loves Me, Something Rotten, Book of Mormon, The Lion King, and Wicked.  These are only a few of the current shows, a list slanted toward those on the humorous and romantic side, away from the more dramatic musicals like Fiddler on the Roof or The Color Purple, and avoiding non-American musicals.  So whether it’s a revival or a new work, the American musical is alive and well on Broadway, and sometimes the lyrics shine with sophistication, wit and occasional wisdom.

At my advancing years (nearly 75 now) one of my favorite lyrics is from Milk and Honey, 1961, by Jerry Herman:

LET’S NOT WASTE A MOMENT,    0603123a
LET’S NOT LOSE A DAY;
THERE’S A SHORT FOREVER,
NOT TOO FAR AWAY.

WE DON’T HAVE TO HEAR THE CLOCK REMIND US
THAT THERE’S MORE THAN HALF OF LIFE BEHIND US,
WHEN YOU FACE A SHORT FOREVER.
THERE’S NO RIGHT OR WRONG;
I CAN ONLY FACE FOREVER,
IF YOU COME ALONG.
I CAN ONLY FIND MY WAY,
IF YOU’RE THERE TO LEAD ME ON;

SO LET’S NOT WASTE A MOMENT,
OH, LOOK, ANOTHER MOMENT’S GONE!

I remember hearing that lyric in the Colonial Theatre in Boston at the tender age of 20 (sung by Robert Weede to Mimi Benzell).  I understood it completely then, and I definitely understand it now, that I, too, don’t need to hear a clock remind me that there is more than half of life behind me.  It hasn’t lost a particle of its truth in the intervening 55 years.

I’d like to hear from some of you about your favorite lyrics, words that moved you in the safety of theatre and continue to speak to you now, in the harsh light of reality where for 50 people forever can be very short indeed.

–John
June 13, 2016

 

Hearing the important vocal line in an ensemble

Vocal layering and complexity are great, right? But what if you really need ONE character’s vocal line to stand out above the rest? Here’s a quick look at a couple ways to accomplish that.  

Using your melody line to help stress a lyric’s meaning

It’s not just the accents of the time signature which can affect the emphasis of the lyric.  Words can be stressed by a change in the direction of the vocal line.  Sometimes that’s exactly what you want.  Other times, not so much.  

more than just a metronome marking

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09 Family Moments

There’s so much more you can be doing with that metronome marking.  Mood, tempo, groove, emotion….Here’s a pair of tips how to get more mileage out of that white space right above the first measure.

JULY 15 SUBMISSION DEADLINE FOR SEARCH FOR NEW MUSICALS

Have you written a great new musical, and are you looking for feedback and/or an opportunity for a concert reading? Don’t miss the July 15 deadline for the annual Search for New Musicals at the Academy for New Musical Theatre.

The Search for New Musicals accepts entries from around the globe; winners receive awards worth up to $25,000 in workshop productions, concert readings, feedback, and developmental support.

“We are thrilled to sponsor the Search,” says Elise Dewsberry, Artistic Director of the Academy. “We love seeing what writers are creating; and of course our mission is to nurture the folks who are writing musicals, so I’m looking forward to seeing what submissions we will get this season.”

Established in 2008, the Search for New Musicals has awarded concert readings and/or workshops to twenty promising new musicals including It Happened in Roswell by Terrence Atkins and Jeffery Lyle Segal; The Looking Glass Wars by by Kurt Kuenne, based on the novel by Frank Beddor; Infamous by Karen M. Cohen and Stephen Kingsbury; Mad Bomber by Charles Monagan and Richard de Rosa; Emerald by Chris Burgess and Denise Wright; Chapter Eleven by Stephen Telfer; Gilbert & Sullivan on Wall Street by Charles Veley; The Water by Georgia Stitt, Jeff Hylton, and Tim Werenko; Rocket Boys by Homer Hickam, Jr., Chris Budinich, Diana Belkowski, Dan Tramon, and Carl Anthony Tramon; Girl Detective by Alan Gordon and Mark Sutton-Smith; Greenbrier Ghost by Susan Murray and Clay Zambo; The Next Fairy Tale by Brian Pugach; and Life After Life by Tracey Langran Corea and Thaddeus Corea.

If you’ve written a musical, and you would like some honest, constructive, detailed feedback on how to make your musical better, you can submit your musical to ANMT for dramaturgical feedback at levels from evaluation to analysis to table reading to workshop to concert reading.

The submission deadline this season is July 15, 2014. All submissions will receive either an audio Overview Evaluation ($100 submission level) or an audio/video Detailed Analysis ($400 submission level), and will also be automatically entered into the Search contest..

“I’ve never received a more cogent and useable evaluation,” wrote Search writer Elliott Baker (author of The Tooth Fairy’s Daughter). “I’m very comfortable with the critique process but I have never finished reading a critique/evaluation with as much desire and energy to go to work on and polish a piece.”

“The evaluation was far more in-depth than I expected and seemed to cover all the key aspects of the show. Frankly, I found it more helpful than a staged reading would have been,” stated Search participant Barbara Campbell (bookwriter/lyricist of The Awakening). “This critique offered me far more in-depth comments into the basic ‘nuts and bolts’ than I have ever received to date.”

British writer Michael Dresser stated “The real value of this service is in its rarity: from genuine industry professionals who have the clarity and vision to provide feedback with no bias or agenda and which asks the right questions and suggestions to enable YOU to genuinely UNDERSTAND how to make your work a better piece of musical theatre - the long term benefits of which are incalculable!”

All entries will receive constructive dramaturgical feedback, and will be entered in the Search contest. The winner of the 2014 Search will be announced by November 15, and will receive a workshop with the Academy Repertory Company, detailed feedback from the ANMT staff, and will be given a concert reading in Los Angeles.

Writers can submit their shows electronically via ANMT’s website, or submit materials by mail after completing an online submission form.

Information on submitting to the Search is available by CLICKING HERE.